100wc 29/4/19

When we arrived the sight was appalling! Trees were cut down and leaves and bits of wood were strewn around. It smelt terrible, plus we had to stay there for three whole days!

Back at home we saw an ad in the newspaper saying there was a free 3 day holiday at a planet called Bloop. So we took off in a shuttle to this ‘free holiday’. Now most things like this end up with a bad ending, but this one? Not so much. We called in friends and started to clean up this place. Now it is a beautiful land. But this land that was called Bloop is now something called ‘Earth’.

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  1. Jennifer – I loved reading this piece. What a creative approach to the visual prompt. I enjoyed the clever way you started in the present, but then changed to the past to tell us the back story about how they got there and then finished up in the present again. This is very tricky to do well, but you have shown great command of the use of tenses. Well done.

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