100wc 18/6/19

Hi, my name is Mary and let me tell you my story on how the dominoes got into our city.

In our city we have two giants watching over us from above. They both liked to make chain reactions with dominoes. One of them liked to cheat. Now, the one that liked to cheat, sneakily put glue on 2 of the domino’s bottoms before the other giant made his domino chain reaction. “Plonk,plonk,plo” the dominoes stopped on the ones that were glued down. “Ha,ha you lose” chanted the one that liked to cheat. In rage the other giant threw all the dominoes off the table and onto our city. The 2 that were glued, stuck to our footpath. The rest? I don’t know where they went.

Homework

Hi Sophie, I really like the way the teacher got exited just because the whole class was there. Good job! I think you might need to edit your work because there is some grammar things you need to fix up. Apart from that it is really good!
Jennifer

To Joel,
I really liked the way that you used some emotion. I am not sure what you need to work on because your post is already amazing! Keep up making amazing 100 word challenges!
From Jennifer

To Aleyna,

Wow, I like the way that when you saw the sign it made me think that the store/school is really old because some of the letters are missing in the sign. I think you might need to check the some of the punctuation. Nevertheless it was amazing!
From Jennifer

Hi Charlie,
I liked this because it related to the real world.(When you were playing with your friends on the Xbox.) I think you need to work on some punctuation in your story. Otherwise your 100wc is really COOL!

From Jennifer

100wc 5/6/19 …Why was that hat on the table?…

I woke up to hear the front door creaking open then shutting again. ” What was that?” I asked aloud. No answer. I got dressed and went downstairs to investigate. There on the table was a hat. Why was that hat on the table? I go and get Mum from upstairs. As she comes down I look on the table, the hat was gone! “Where is the hat?” Mum asks in a questioning way. “B…b…but it was there a minute ago!” I say, confused. Mum goes back upstairs to bed. I turn around and the hat is back!

“Knock, knock” I sigh, this day has been so confusing! A tall man walks in, gives me a wink and walks out with the hat. “Huh?!” I say.

100wc 28/5/19 Rose,Scooter,Excitedly, Transparent, Late

It was another boring Monday morning and Mum had already left for work. Suddenly I looked at the time. School started in 5 minutes! I was going to be late! Sorry, I haven’t introduced myself! My name is Rose and my Mum and me live in a small house together. My Dad disappeared 2 years ago.

I got ready in record time and was about to scooter to school when I heard a “ping”, coming from my room. I excitedly ran to my room and Dad was standing there! But he was transparent?! I shook my head and looked again. He was no longer there! “Feh” I said, and carried on to school.

100wc 29/4/19

When we arrived the sight was appalling! Trees were cut down and leaves and bits of wood were strewn around. It smelt terrible, plus we had to stay there for three whole days!

Back at home we saw an ad in the newspaper saying there was a free 3 day holiday at a planet called Bloop. So we took off in a shuttle to this ‘free holiday’. Now most things like this end up with a bad ending, but this one? Not so much. We called in friends and started to clean up this place. Now it is a beautiful land. But this land that was called Bloop is now something called ‘Earth’.

100wc 25/3/19

Prompt:  … I was so cross that …

One day I was driving my car, minding my own business when a cyclist came out in front of me. He was going so slow that I almost exploded with anger. It’s OK, I told myself, just go into the other lane to over take him. So I did that. Just when I did that, he rode his bike into my lane! So I swapped back. So did he! I was so cross that I beeped my horn at him, and turned my car around. I was going home. I hope I never see him again.

100wc 4/3/2019

Prompt: RED   LADDER   SINKING   COINS   PAVEMENT

One particular day I got given a bag of very shiny RED COINS. Right away I thought that I had to keep them. When my little sister asked for one I said NO! Normally I would have said yes, but not today. Suddenly I tripped and fell down onto the PAVEMENT! The bag of coins flew out of my hand and started SINKING to the bottom of our well. I sprinted to the shed to get the LADDER, to retrieve my beautiful coins. Once I had gotten them out I gave one to my sister.

100wc the vinegar was too sharp

Prompt …the vinegar was too sharp…

“Eeeeww I hate vinegar” I whine as my sister buys some salt and vinegar chips. My whole family is obsessed with vinegar. I don’t even know why. I think it is way too sharp and the disgusting feeling goes all the way down my throat! I have a Mum, Dad, and 2 older sisters. Every time we go to the shop we either get more vinegar, or more of anything that has vinegar in it. Soo boring! The thing I like most is original chips and other things like that. Vinegar is just not my thing.

 

100wc 2

It was a fine looking day when my owner took me out of her bedroom. “We’re going on a walk!” she cried happily. So there I went swinging in her hand as she skipped along. When we got to the train station there was a toy store. Suddenly I knew what was going to happen. When she gets there and goes into the shop, she will come out with a new teddy and leave me. Then it happened. Now I am lying here waiting for a child to love me. Soon a small girl came over and took me home.

100wc

It was a fine looking day when my owner took me out of her bedroom. “were going on a walk!” she cried happily. So there I went swinging in her hand as she skipped along. When we got to the train station there was a toy store. suddenly I knew what was going to happen. when she gets there and goes into the shop, she will come out with a new teddy and leave me. Then it happened. Now I am lying here waiting for a child to love me. Soon a small girl came over and took me home.